I have the solution, now have to go back and rewrite, but it should add more in, and I don't think it will take more than three paragraphs.
May you think about your creativity today.
Personal notes on writing techniques, writing a novel, my writing career and threading your way through publishing a book.
RITA Award Winning Author -- that's like the Oscar, folks! Futuristic/Fantasy Romance and Fantasy with Romantic Subplots.